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Tuesday, 28 August 2018

Persuasive Writting


'Fireworks are a waste of public money and have no value.'

  • To be honest, it's not because its only for once in a year to enjoy it, it's not like every day the fireworks is very useful for the new years and other celebration it's not that big of a deal. These fireworks make everyone happy seeing beautiful fireworks, and also not for kids in the Philippines when it's like new years children like to play fireworks and I know it's also a bit of a waste to spend money but for us, I think its natural when  kids get ill every new year. In our country when the fireworks start outside will be like loud so loud that we can't even hear the music they're having fireworks at least it's not boring, its so loud and also the smoke comes through our house and also we had a lot of fun. fireworks are just for fun it's only for celebrations and stuff it's not that a waste of money.

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